WHY I'VE BEEN NEGLECTIVE:
Finals. Exams. Graduation. Job preparation. I'm moving. And basically I was stuck on Page 10. But since I've lost the last two I've decided I'll also update an extra page because I've been such a let down the the last two weeks. C:
Page 9:
Comments: Welp, had to redo this page to fix the a bit of dialogue so it matches with the next page.
Page 10:
Comments: Redrew this many times. I really didn't know how to show it visually and I was getting bored. My style from Page 7 really sucked so I'm trying some new things to make it more interesting at least. Messed up on the Zombie in the background in the bottom panel. Lack of a mouth.
I also wonder if this page is too meta and stretching the humor. Personally I like it.
Page 11:
Comments: Really awkward. What's happening is that Walkre is tackling me down to the ground so Aikio can distract it in the next page. I hope this is what you guys see. e__e
Zombie's mouth looks awkward. Maybe I'll fix that along with Page 10 in the future.
So does my mouth. Still trying to figure those out.
I do like how I hide the eyes and have a large picture of Walkre above Walkre. I asked my friends about that and they said it looked like a cool concept so I kept it. It took up a lot of blank space also.
The format of this page is exactly the same as Page 10. Have to avoid that. o .o