Map submission : Town_Objective

[Shinyshark]

Name of map:
Town_Objective.

Author:
Shinyshark.
Size:
144x144

Map boundary:
There's no boundary needed, The void stops people and they can't get out anyway.

Kits:

• Survivor: Two bread and a Wooden sword.
• Hunters: A stone sword.

Random or choose kits?:
Random (For as far as that is possible with two kits)

Screenshots:

Spoiler: Pictures

Notes:

This is the first attempt at a map with an objective for as far as I know.

Building time is 20 seconds.​

Objectives​

• Activate the generator to open the gate.
• Find something to get over the debris.Break open the bank.
• Gather supplies for eventual fights.
• Break open the bunker.
• Survive the unslaught!

This goes for both Humans and Zombies!

Breakable blocks...

• Redstone_ore.
• Redstone_torch.

Placeable blocks...

• Planks.
• Vines.
• Redstone_torch.

Download link :​

/boxel shinyshark​

 

[Iguana]

But what IS the objective...

 

[Friendy]

But what IS the objective...

To survive most likely, just a question, did you make this today? as I saw you building it earlier and there was like.. nothing there.. uhm, is there enough chests for the survivors due to them only having 1 kit? It'd be kinda unfair if there wasn't enough swords or defensive weapons for survivors when they can't punch Hunters, yet they spawn with swords. :L

 

[Numberplay]

I'm certain the map is too small. Just look at this

You don't even use 10% or the boxel space. There's no way this map can be added with that much unused space.

 

[Shinyshark]

I'm certain the map is too small. Just look at this

You don't even use 10% or the boxel space. There's no way this map can be added with that much unused space.

I do agree, at first it was just a test to certain objectives. I'll definitly add more buildings later on.

 

[Jayfeather]

This is from Zombie Panic Source, isn't it Shiny? (Roughly, sense the things are out of order, and some are named differently)
If it is, and is built in that sense, I think it could be a very interesting map, especially with the unique objectives put in place. (Although, you're going to need some incentive to get the zombies to move from objective to objective, or they will to just sit in the first room and fight, more or less)

Lastly, is this unfinished then? From what you responded to Numberplay with, it sounds like it's not done yet, and that you hopefully plan to add more.

 

[Shinyshark]

This is from Zombie Panic Source, isn't it Shiny? (Roughly, sense the things are out of order, and some are named differently)
If it is, and is built in that sense, I think it could be a very interesting map, especially with the unique objectives put in place. (Although, you're going to need some incentive to get the zombies to move from objective to objective, or they will to just sit in the first room and fight, more or less)

Lastly, is this unfinished then? From what you responded to Numberplay with, it sounds like it's not done yet, and that you hopefully plan to add more.

I got lazy at first and wanted to post this but I am still working on it.
Don't worry, I am continuing this; Maybe lock this for the time being?

 

[Friendy]

I got lazy at first and wanted to post this but I am still working on it.
Don't worry, I am continuing this; Maybe lock this for the time being?

You'd most likely have to withdraw it incase it gets denied, so you don't have to re-submit in 2 weeks.

 

[Mac27]

You'd most likely have to withdraw it incase it gets denied, so you don't have to re-submit in 2 weeks.

Unless you can make the needed changes quickly (within 24 hours or so), the above is the case.

 

[Friendy]

Unless you can make the needed changes quickly (within 24 hours or so), the above is the case.

He's doing that now.

 

[Shinyshark]

He's doing that now.

Not entirely sure if I can make it within 24 hours though.

 

[Friendy]

Not entirely sure if I can make it within 24 hours though.

CALL IN THE BUILDERS.

 

[Notme]

CALL IN THE BUILDERS.

For example Numberplay?

 

[Shinyshark]

I want to withdraw my map.
I have a lot to work in!

 

[Mac27]

I want to withdraw my map.
I have a lot to work in!

Good choice, it's better to take the time to make the map much better than rushing it and it only being a little better. Best of luck improving it, and we'll see it soon.

 

[Shinyshark]

The map is now finished and I have updated the OP.
Any suggestions on how to improve it are accepted, otherwise the map is done.

 

[Jayfeather]

From the screenshots,
The aesthetics don't sit well with me, the exterior of the buildings really clashes, especially with the roof designs; also, the trees look pretty awkward.
From the interior pictures, I really can't see much. Are they the interiors of the buildings? They look rather small, if so.

I'll check your Boxel, but I think this is the first 0/-1 from me.

 

[Shinyshark]

From the screenshots,
The aesthetics don't sit well with me, the exterior of the buildings really clashes, especially with the roof designs; also, the trees look pretty awkward.
From the interior pictures, I really can't see much. Are they the interiors of the buildings? They look rather small, if so.

I'll check your Boxel, but I think this is the first 0/-1 from me.

I agree, The trees look silly from above to but that's the overgrown part where you can not go. The houses aren't all accesible and some of them function as 'walls'. I'm not the best at designing buildings but I did try.

 

[Friendy]

From the screenshots,
The aesthetics don't sit well with me, the exterior of the buildings really clashes, especially with the roof designs; also, the trees look pretty awkward.
From the interior pictures, I really can't see much. Are they the interiors of the buildings? They look rather small, if so.

I'll check your Boxel, but I think this is the first 0/-1 from me.

As he said to me yesterday, he's trying to aim the map towards gameplay and not what it looks like; the map, in my opinion is fine.

 

[Jayfeather]

I have a revised opinion, Shiny brought me through the map and showed me that sometimes screenshots aren't everything.
The maps mechanics are clever at worst, and my initial worry about space has been in vain considering the open-ness of the city streets and the fact that only objective buildings are that small. You don't stay in objective buildings for long. Also, one or two have some more floors, increasing the size. The trees really don't look that bad from a ground view; same with the buildings. The objectives take long enough that you probably wouldn't run out of time and have to fight at the end with 3-6 minutes left. There are also side objectives to keep Hunters and Survivors thinking and going for the gold, so to speak.
+1 from me.

However, the map has one spot that where you have to break something, very far into the map, (Build time and what not) Shiny is fixing this and it should only take a few minutes from what I can tell.

 

[Shinyshark]

I fixed the three objectives.
They work with a torch now, Thanks jay!

 

[Friendy]

I just noticed a flaw.

Placeable blocks...

• Planks.
• Vines.
• Redstone_torch.

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They can place these to get out of the map.

 

[Shinyshark]

I just noticed a flaw.

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They can place these to get out of the map.

I know that too, They can use the planks and vines to get out, but I can't really stop them unless I take away the planks and leave only one vine making it impossible to do the objective.

Otherwise the baricades will go, but I can't remove the vines.

 

[Friendy]

I know that too, They can use the planks and vines to get out, but I can't really stop them unless I take away the planks and leave only one vine making it impossible to do the objective.

Otherwise the baricades will go, but I can't remove the vines.

Make the barricades thicker, I.E 3 barricades with a 3 block gap or something.

 

[Shinyshark]

I would like to restart my boxel to build other things but the map is still on it, I'd hate it be rude too but could we get a decesion on wheter it's accepted or declined so that I can start building again?

Iguana