Map Submission: Camping_Trip

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balloon98

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Name of map: Camping_Trip
Author:balloon98
Size: 144x144
Map boundary: Map boundaries can be seen from Jack-o-lanterns around the map
Kits: Humans: Tourist: speed potion 3 watermelon wooden sword Zombie: Paladin stone sword 32 dirt Ninja: speed potion wooden sword 64 dirt
Random or choose kits?: random
Screenshots: http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=14&u=16619763
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Notes: This map humans HAVE to work together and share what they find or will die out. pumpkin marks where i would like spawn to be and would like only furnaces crafting benches and enchantment tables be placed and only wooden planks and iron doors to be broken
Download Link: on BuildBlox server under Boxel_balloon98
 
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Eh, It's alright I guess, I can't seam to see the camping theme running through it though. Nor is it particulally advanced in terms of zombie strategies and things. I'll just dictate out the things I think can be improved, I'm not ripping it to shit, just stating what can be fixed :)

  • Less wasted space, I see lots of trees from the middle to one side, trees aren't very interesting.
  • The Tents are too multi coloured, they just look a bit odd. Simple is often better!
  • I don't really understand the big fire pit, I have never been to a camp site that has one massive fire big enough to roast an entire apartment block. More and smaller fires I think would be better
Also, I think adding some height (as in hills) would make it more interesting.
Good work, but I think you can do better ;)
 

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I don't understand why the Paladin zombie gets half the blocks and no speed potion but the ninja gets twice as much blocks and a speed potion. Is the ninja an upgraded Paladin?
Oh thats my bad I meant for ninja to have a wooden sword not stone let me fix that. As for Mac's suggestions I appreciate the feedback and improvements I can work on also the reason I think this map is good since all humans HAVE to work together since 1 chest helps you use something in another
 

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Oh thats my bad I meant for ninja to have a wooden sword not stone let me fix that. As for Mac's suggestions I appreciate the feedback and improvements I can work on also the reason I think this map is good since all humans HAVE to work together since 1 chest helps you use something in another
Players typically do not work like this. If a human finds good stuff, hell no are they going to share it with other people, they want to turn it into good stuff so they can be the tank that never dies. The fact that you can't do anything with one chests contents are useless without the others, changes the rules a bit. Though, new players are still going to say oooh, shiny stuff, and take it all anyways. This worries me a bit, and I definitely agree with Mac about aesthetics, and a cobblestone village doesn't strike me as a camping trip.
 
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