Yes! You should continue making the map :D Luckily, at this early stage in development, I feel that it should be pretty easy for you to make changes. Here's what I think about the map so far.
The map design is good, and I like the style of the islands, but I feel that this particular theme of map is slightly overused - Forest: be it floating or flat. Also, if you were to use jump boost, there is a high chance that players will miss the jump by a little and fall off by hitting the edge of an island.
To solve both of these problems, you could go with a floating jungle theme. Jungle maps aren't terribly common on the server (at least maps with jungle being the main theme), and the main advantage would be to have an excuse to have vines spammed around each island. Vines would be easy for players to grab onto even if they miss a jump slightly, so that would minimize void deaths. If players are dying by the environment more than by hunters, I don't feel it's a particularly well made map
(unless of course that is the main purpose of the map...)
Don't feel restricted by this suggestion however, if you want to go the ender pearl route, then an alternative theme option instead of forest could be desert. "Fragmented Desert" or something like that, with large and small slivers of sandy and rocky desert floating around, requiring enderpearl precision to go navigate.
I personally would prefer the jungle option, just because of the unreliability of enderp earls. This is just my opinion however, you should think about it on you own and look at other suggestions to make the final decision. Good luck with the map, I hope to see it submitted sometime :)