[COMP] City Trial

smashball5 · May 28, 2013

I have made a map for the AoD map contest. It is based off of Kirby Air Ride: City Trial. I will try to get everything right right now. Here I go.

Code:

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MapName: City Trial
Author: smashball5
BuildTime: 60
GameTime: 600
WorldTime: 6000
SpawnProtectTime: 0
WorldWeather: 0
Team0:
SpawnType: 0
SpawnLocation:
==: Vector
x: -697
y: 67
z: -2470
ChooseKit: false
OneKitPerRound: false
KitResetTime: 0
BoxChance: 0%
Team1:
SpawnType: 0
SpawnLocation:
==: Vector
x: -697
y: 67
z: -2470
ChooseKit: false
Centre:
==: Vector
x: -707
y: i dont have one its up in the air
z: -2480
WorldSize: 273
SkyLimit: 200
ResetInventory: true
CanUseLocate: true
SurvivorRestrictedPlaceAll: true
SurvivorRestrictedBreakAll: true
HunterRestrictedPlaceAll: true
HunterRestrictedBreakAll: true
MysteryBoxChance: 0%

Think im done. ok, onto kits.

Code:

Dark Hunter
Brown Kirby
- Leather Cap
- Iron Sword
- Bow
- 16 arrows
- iron boots
Hunter
Red Kirby
- Leather Cap (dyed red)
- Wooden Sword
- chain boots
Blue Kirby
- Leather Cap (dyed blue)
- Power I Bow
- 64 arrows
- chain boots
Yellow Kirby
- Leather Cap (dyed yellow)
- 3 Zombie Spawn eggs
- 3 Skeleton Spawn eggs
- 3 spider Spawn eggs
- witch Spawn egg
- chain boots
Survivor
Red Kirby
- Leather Cap (dyed red)
- Wooden Sword
- chain boots
Blue Kirby
- Leather Cap (dyed blue)
- Power I Bow
- 64 arrows
- chain boots
Green Kirby
- Leather cap (dyed lime)
- 3 Splash Potion of Harming (stacked)
- 3 Splash potion of Healing (stacked)
- Potion of Swiftness
- Splash Potion of Poison
- chain boots
Pink Kirby
- stone sword

I would like to mention again that this is for the AoD map contest based off of games. Mine is Kirby Air Ride: City Trial

Can you tell me what else I might have to do to submit this map?

Completed input file:

Code:

MapName: CityTrial
Author: smashball5
BuildTime: 60
GameTime: 600
WorldTime: 6000
SpawnProtectTime: 0
WorldWeather: 0
Team0:
  SpawnType: 0
  SpawnLocation:
    ==: Vector
    x: -697
    y: 67
    z: -2470
  ChooseKit: false
  OneKitPerRound: false
  KitResetTime: 1
  BoxChance: 0
Team1:
  SpawnType: 0
  SpawnLocation:
    ==: Vector
    x: -697
    y: 67
    z: -2470
  ChooseKit: false
Centre:
  ==: Vector
  x: -707
  y: 72
  z: -2480
WorldSize: 90
SkyLimit: 200
ResetInventory: true
CanUseLocate: true
SurvivorRestrictedPlaceAll: true
SurvivorRestrictedBreakAll: true
HunterRestrictedPlaceAll: true
HunterRestrictedBreakAll: true
MysteryBoxChance: 0
SurvivorRestrictedBreak:
SurvivorRestrictedPlace:
SurvivorRestrictedBreakEx:
HunterRestrictedPlace:
HunterRestrictedBreak:
Kit:
  HunterFree:
    Scavenger:
    - WOOD_SWORD
  Juggernaut:
    Titan:
    - DIAMOND_HELMET
    - DIAMOND_CHESTPLATE
    - DIAMOND_LEGGINGS
    - DIAMOND_BOOTS
    - DIAMOND_SWORD
    - BOW
    - GRILLED_PORK|16
    - WOOL|64
    - POTION.8258|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.8257|1
    - ARROW|64
  HunterLeader:
    Brown_Kirby:
    - IRON_SWORD
    - BOW
    - ARROW|16
    - IRON_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
  HunterStart:
    Red_Kirby:
    - WOOD_SWORD
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - RED_ROSE+Red dye!:Use it to make you red, Kirby!
    Blue_Kirby:
    - BOW.ARROW_DAMAGE:1
    - ARROW|64
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - LAPIS_BLOCK+Blue dye!:Use it to make you blue, Kirby!
    Yellow_Kirby:
    - MONSTER_EGG.54|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.51|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.52|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.66|1
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - YELLOW_FLOWER+Yellow dye!:Use it to make you yellow, Kirby!
  SurvivorStart:
    Red_Kirby:
    - WOOD_SWORD
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - RED_ROSE+Red dye!:Use it to make you red, Kirby!
    - BREAD|5
    Blue_Kirby:
    - BOW.ARROW_DAMAGE:1
    - ARROW|64
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LAPIS_BLOCK+Blue dye!:Use it to make you blue, Kirby!
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - BREAD|5
    Green_Kirby:
    - POTION.16396|3
    - POTION.16389|3
    - POTION.8258|1
    - POTION.16388|1
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - CACTUS+Green dye!:Use it to make you green, Kirby!
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - WOOD_AXE
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - BREAD|5
    - BONE+White dye!:Use this with the green dye to make yourself lime green, Kirby!
    Pink_Kirby:
    - STONE_SWORD
    - BREAD|5

MustabearXD · May 28, 2013

Screenshots of the map? Other than that everything else is here.

radman573 · May 28, 2013

You might want to fill out a map submission format, it would make the jobs of the peeps who judge your map easier.

http://blocktopia.net/forum/threads...-map-information-compulsory-format-here.8233/

ealev · May 28, 2013

smashball5
You have the input file, but please follow the format:
Name of map:
Author:
Size:
Map boundary:
Kits:
Random or choose kits?:
Screenshots:
Notes:
Download Link:
Input File:
Thanks for the submission, can't wait to look at it!

smashball5 · May 28, 2013

Thanks for all the help. What would I do for input file, exactly?
EDIT: I see what the input file is never mind. Thanks

Infected_alien8_ · May 28, 2013

Hey! First off, thanks for submitting a map! I will get onto how much I like the map once you have filled out the format you have been given, but I will be working on an input file for you in the meantime (you seem to have done some bits wrong with the items!)
I just need to know the y axis for the center of the map. I understand that the map is in the air, but you should still be able to get one. Just mark out an area of the whole map with your wand, from top to bottom and from both corners and then //center red if you are using world edit.
Thanks!
Also, please don't double post; I have edited it into your last one.
Also, evidence for the game you have based it off would be appreciated greatly!

Jivvi · May 28, 2013

KIRBY BUDDIES!!
:laugh:

Mine was based off Kirby Scope Shot, may the best Kirby win!

smashball5 · May 29, 2013

Name of Map: City Trial
Author: smashball5
Size of Map: 1151280
Map Boundary: z boundary: -2570, 163 blocks wide, -2391
x boundary: -787, 180 blocks wide, -626
Kits:

Code:

Dark Hunter
Brown Kirby
- Leather Cap
- Iron Sword
- Bow
- 16 arrows
- iron boots
Hunter
Red Kirby
- Leather Cap (dyed red)
- Wooden Sword
- chain boots
Blue Kirby
- Leather Cap (dyed blue)
- Power I Bow
- 64 arrows
- chain boots
Yellow Kirby
- Leather Cap (dyed yellow)
- 3 Zombie Spawn eggs
- 3 Skeleton Spawn eggs
- 3 spider Spawn eggs
- witch Spawn egg
- chain boots
Survivor
Red Kirby
- Leather Cap (dyed red)
- Wooden Sword
- chain boots
Blue Kirby
- Leather Cap (dyed blue)
- Power I Bow
- 64 arrows
- chain boots
Green Kirby
- Leather cap (dyed lime)
- 3 Splash Potion of Harming (stacked)
- 3 Splash potion of Healing (stacked)
- Potion of Swiftness
- Splash Potion of Poison
- chain boots
Pink Kirby
- stone sword

Random or choose kits: Random
Screenshots -
What its based off of

Notes: At first the Kirbys don't start out with much, put I put some chain, leather, iron swords, and some potions into some of the chests. hopefully one person doesnt take everything. the chests are so spread out that there isnt really a change of them stealing everything. Everyone should at least get one item from each chest. there is a warp, but I accidentally made it my name. I think SalientGorilla made a warp named CityTrial close to mine
Download file: The download is on the schematic page named CityTrial. The schematic was actually Jubjubers because i didnt know exactly how to make one. there are also warps listed above to get to the map.
Input File: Provided by Infected_alien8. Thanks. :)

and also, the y coordinate for the center is 72, i meant that i made the center up in the air, not the map, sorry for the miscommunication.

excuse me for my stupidity, but I also do not know how to put screenshots into the post, but there are warps if you want to look at the map. If the screenshots are necessary, could you please tell me how to move them to the forum reply? Please tell me if I have done anything wrong because I'm sure I have. Thanks.

Jivvi · May 29, 2013

smashball5 said:
excuse me for my stupidity, but I also do not know how to put screenshots into the post, but there are warps if you want to look at the map. If the screenshots are necessary, could you please tell me how to move them to the forum reply? Please tell me if I have done anything wrong because I'm sure I have. Thanks.

If you press F2, you take a screenshot, and pressing F1 removs the hotbar, held item an chat from the screen, providing a cleaner screenshot! The map seems fun, so good luck!
:laugh:

smashball5 · May 29, 2013

I have the screenshots, and I know how to access them in a folder, but it doesn't move from the folder to the forums.

Infected_alien8_ · May 29, 2013

smashball5 said:
I have the screenshots, and I know how to access them in a folder, but it doesn't move from the folder to the forums.

Okay, simply go to imgur.com and then click upload images from computer. Then select the screenshots and then click upload. After the process is complete, copy the link provided and simply paste the link into your post! Then anyone who clicks the link will see the images

Also, thanks for following the format! You have made it very easy for me to make the input file so it should be done very soon.
As for the map itself, I do like the idea of the map, and I think that the map will offer some fun gameplay! However, the thing that puts me off are the builds themselves. I know i'm not one to talk, but a lot of the houses are just flat and square; they look quite boring and it doesn't look like a lot of effort went into making them. Maybe add roofs to them and make them less of a basic shape?
Also, things like this: http://imgur.com/BBPJE0l
just don't look right in my opinion. Maybe make it so it's more of a hill than just a flat edged block of dirt?

The kits look okay, but remember that hunters cannot wear helmets. I suggest giving them coloured boots/chestplates instead, but it's up to you.
Also, I recommend giving 'Yellow kirby' and 'Green kirby' a weak weapon. I know how much people get annoyed when they receive a kit with just mob eggs/potions and no weapon. Maybe just a stone shovel or something?

Last thing, the map has to be square shaped i'm afraid. I don't think yours is, but I can't tell xD (It seems you did the 'Map size' section wrong. This section is about how many blocks each side of the map is, and it definitely isn't 1151280

) But if you want you can always just say that your map is the whole plot but section the bits off that you don't want; the map just have to be a square to be uploaded.

o for now, but if you make the builds better, I will go with a +1 :)
Your input file will be ready shortly

EDIT: I'd also recommend food for the survivors.
EDIT: Also, I don't believe dyed armour can be added, so I will have to add the things to make the dye in the kits (I don't think you can actually add the dye itself either). Sorry! Also, smashball5 does pink kirby also get a pink helmet?

EDIT AGAIN: Okay, so I have added items to make dye and named then '<Colour> dye!' with a description of 'Use it to make you <colour>, Kirby!' Is that okay? It will just make it more obvious what it's for

I will finish the input file once you have told me what I need

smashball5 · May 29, 2013

Kits:

Code:

Dark Hunter
Brown Kirby
- Leather Tunic
- Iron Sword
- Bow
- 16 arrows
- iron boots
Hunter
Red Kirby
- Leather Tunic (dyed red)
- Wooden Sword
- chain boots
- 5 bread
Blue Kirby
- Leather Tunic (dyed blue)
- Power I Bow
- 64 arrows
- chain boots
- 5 bread
Yellow Kirby
- Wooden Axe
- Leather Tunic (dyed yellow)
- 3 Zombie Spawn eggs
- 3 Skeleton Spawn eggs
- 3 spider Spawn eggs
- witch Spawn egg
- chain boots
Survivor
Red Kirby
- Leather Tunic (dyed red)
- Wooden Sword
- chain boots
- 5 bread
Blue Kirby
- Leather Tunic (dyed blue)
- Power I Bow
- 64 arrows
- chain boots
- 5 bread
Green Kirby
- Wooden Axe
- Leather Tunic (dyed lime)
- 3 Splash Potion of Harming (stacked)
- 3 Splash potion of Healing (stacked)
- Potion of Swiftness
- Splash Potion of Poison
- chain boots
- 5 bread
Pink Kirby
- stone sword
- 5 bread
 
dyes and leather tunics instead of dyed helmets, Infected, thanks for all the help.  the pink kirby gets only that because he has a stone sword instead of the red Kirby's wood sword, and that wouldn't be fair for the red kirby. :)

Screenshots:
http://imgur.com/K0jPxyr,VIAsihQ,Sd...7wL,EEOGjXT,0psdvXp,Z0D9g0J,ruO4q2e,qlVZZQU#0

The size of map is covered in Map Boundary. if its a square, could you make it 180 for the boundary size?
I will work on the build and resave the schematic. I dont really know how to make the schematic, so i will try to get jub to resave it for me. Thanks for all the good help/information Infected and ealev. Please let me know if i left out anything else.

Infected_alien8_ · May 29, 2013

smashball5 said:
Kits:

Code:

Dark Hunter Brown Kirby - Leather Tunic - Iron Sword - Bow - 16 arrows - iron boots Hunter Red Kirby - Leather Tunic (dyed red) - Wooden Sword - chain boots - 5 bread Blue Kirby - Leather Tunic (dyed blue) - Power I Bow - 64 arrows - chain boots - 5 bread Yellow Kirby - Wooden Axe - Leather Tunic (dyed yellow) - 3 Zombie Spawn eggs - 3 Skeleton Spawn eggs - 3 spider Spawn eggs - witch Spawn egg - chain boots Survivor Red Kirby - Leather Tunic (dyed red) - Wooden Sword - chain boots - 5 bread Blue Kirby - Leather Tunic (dyed blue) - Power I Bow - 64 arrows - chain boots - 5 bread Green Kirby - Wooden Axe - Leather Tunic (dyed lime) - 3 Splash Potion of Harming (stacked) - 3 Splash potion of Healing (stacked) - Potion of Swiftness - Splash Potion of Poison - chain boots - 5 bread Pink Kirby - stone sword - 5 bread dyes and leather tunics instead of dyed helmets, Infected, thanks for all the help. the pink kirby gets only that because he has a stone sword instead of the red Kirby's wood sword, and that wouldn't be fair for the red kirby. :)

Screenshots:
http://imgur.com/K0jPxyr,VIAsihQ,Sd...7wL,EEOGjXT,0psdvXp,Z0D9g0J,ruO4q2e,qlVZZQU#0

The size of map is covered in Map Boundary. if its a square, could you make it 180 for the boundary size?
I will work on the build and resave the schematic. I dont really know how to make the schematic, so i will try to get jub to resave it for me. Thanks for all the good help/information Infected and ealev. Please let me know if i left out anything else.

Looks good to me, thanks! However, remember that hunters don't need food (unless you gave them food so the survivors get a reward for when the kill them)! I have left them out, is that okay?
Here is the input file!

Code:

MapName: CityTrial
Author: smashball5
BuildTime: 60
GameTime: 600
WorldTime: 6000
SpawnProtectTime: 0
WorldWeather: 0
Team0:
  SpawnType: 0
  SpawnLocation:
    ==: Vector
    x: -697
    y: 67
    z: -2470
  ChooseKit: false
  OneKitPerRound: false
  KitResetTime: 1
  BoxChance: 0
Team1:
  SpawnType: 0
  SpawnLocation:
    ==: Vector
    x: -697
    y: 67
    z: -2470
  ChooseKit: false
Centre:
  ==: Vector
  x: -707
  y: 72
  z: -2480
WorldSize: 90
SkyLimit: 200
ResetInventory: true
CanUseLocate: true
SurvivorRestrictedPlaceAll: true
SurvivorRestrictedBreakAll: true
HunterRestrictedPlaceAll: true
HunterRestrictedBreakAll: true
MysteryBoxChance: 0
SurvivorRestrictedBreak:
SurvivorRestrictedPlace:
SurvivorRestrictedBreakEx:
HunterRestrictedPlace:
HunterRestrictedBreak:
Kit:
  HunterFree:
    Scavenger:
    - WOOD_SWORD
  Juggernaut:
    Titan:
    - DIAMOND_HELMET
    - DIAMOND_CHESTPLATE
    - DIAMOND_LEGGINGS
    - DIAMOND_BOOTS
    - DIAMOND_SWORD
    - BOW
    - GRILLED_PORK|16
    - WOOL|64
    - POTION.8258|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.8257|1
    - ARROW|64
  HunterLeader:
    Brown_Kirby:
    - IRON_SWORD
    - BOW
    - ARROW|16
    - IRON_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
  HunterStart:
    Red_Kirby:
    - WOOD_SWORD
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - RED_ROSE+Red dye!:Use it to make you red, Kirby!
    Blue_Kirby:
    - BOW.ARROW_DAMAGE:1
    - ARROW|64
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - LAPIS_BLOCK+Blue dye!:Use it to make you blue, Kirby!
    Yellow_Kirby:
    - MONSTER_EGG.54|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.51|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.52|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.66|1
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - YELLOW_FLOWER+Yellow dye!:Use it to make you yellow, Kirby!
  SurvivorStart:
    Red_Kirby:
    - WOOD_SWORD
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - RED_ROSE+Red dye!:Use it to make you red, Kirby!
    - BREAD|5
    Blue_Kirby:
    - BOW.ARROW_DAMAGE:1
    - ARROW|64
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LAPIS_BLOCK+Blue dye!:Use it to make you blue, Kirby!
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - BREAD|5
    Green_Kirby:
    - POTION.16396|3
    - POTION.16389|3
    - POTION.8258|1
    - POTION.16388|1
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - CACTUS+Green dye!:Use it to make you green, Kirby!
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - WOOD_AXE
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - BREAD|5
    - BONE+White dye!:Use this with the green dye to make yourself lime green, Kirby!
    Pink_Kirby:
    - STONE_SWORD
    - BREAD|5

I gave the green kirby bones and cactus so they can make lime green. But please bare in mind that some people won't bother dying their armour, so sorry I can't make it so you spawn with the armour dyed automatically! I understand it might ruin the effect!
If anyone knows a way, please do tell me!
Is everything alright?
Thanks again for the effort you have put in into helping me with this file. Your first go was really good, and your information was really detailed! Thank you and good luck!

smashball5 · May 29, 2013

Thanks for all the help you have given me. I would like to enter a screenshot of the new rooftops. There is also a screenshot of the inside of the volcanoes that i left out in recent pictures

http://imgur.com/yccDF14,15Ddxco

Thanks for the luck, ill probably need it.

Everything you have done is great, although I wish for people to dye their helmets, its perfectly fine if they don't.

[EDIT]: I have built roofs on my houses and made it look more hill-like over in the forest. Jub resaved the schematic and told me it was saved.

Haysagar · Jun 2, 2013

The map kind of reminds me of the mushroom kingdom map. I feel a bit more detail could be put in the structures. The classes look all right but I can't view the chests for myself to see how balanced the classes and chests are. Other then that I've never played Kirby before x) and I tried looking at a few pictures but I cant find what part of the game or maps you based it off of. So best of luck in the competition!

Jivvi · Jun 2, 2013

Looks pretty good! Not over-detailed, but that's sometimes a good thing, like it is here! Hope I get to play on it sometime soon!

Olix · Jun 2, 2013

Infected_alien8_ said:
Here is the input file!

Code:

MapName: CityTrail Author: smashball5

Erm, I think you meant to say "Mapname: CityTrial"

Also, i really like the map; you did a great job of making it look like the game. It's a little late now, but I'd suggest you add the railways that go around the map as just one-block wide pathways - those were where a lot of deaths happened when Xilo and I played against each other in Kirby Airride :)

smashball5 · Jun 2, 2013

Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you like it. It is a little too late but I see what you mean. If its what I think your saying with it closed in, the survivor/hunter could get trapped between 2 enemies. I didnt catch that mistake, but it should be what Olix said. It should be CityTrial.

ealev · Jun 2, 2013

I'm going with a 0. I can definitely see the resemblance, but it feels very wide open, and some of the transitions between areas aren't very smooth. Thank you for the submission!

smashball5 · Jun 2, 2013

ealev said:
I'm going with a 0. I can definitely see the resemblance, but it feels very wide open, and some of the transitions between areas aren't very smooth. Thank you for the submission!

What exactly do you mean by smooth? Its totally understandable that you gave me a 0, I just want to improve if my map gets denied.

ealev · Jun 2, 2013

smashball5 said:
ealev said:

I'm going with a 0. I can definitely see the resemblance, but it feels very wide open, and some of the transitions between areas aren't very smooth. Thank you for the submission!

Click to expand...

What exactly do you mean by smooth? Its totally understandable that you gave me a 0, I just want to improve if my map gets denied.

The map has different parts, as you know, but it seems like some of the transitions between parts were really sudden, with the blocks quickly changing.

Infected_alien8_ · Jun 2, 2013

Okay I took a look at your map and you certainly made the buildings look a lot better, well done! But I have to agree with eal, there still seems to be something missing regarding the aesthetics. It seems very random and the areas just don't seem to mix in well with each other. Try to solve this, but it's still a o from me.

smashball5 · Jun 3, 2013

ealev said:
smashball5 said:

ealev said:

I'm going with a 0. I can definitely see the resemblance, but it feels very wide open, and some of the transitions between areas aren't very smooth. Thank you for the submission!

Click to expand...

What exactly do you mean by smooth? Its totally understandable that you gave me a 0, I just want to improve if my map gets denied.

Click to expand...

The map has different parts, as you know, but it seems like some of the transitions between parts were really sudden, with the blocks quickly changing.

Was it just between the forest and volcanoes? and was it just between the beach and the volcanoes? or were there more?

Pikmon2 · Jun 3, 2013

I'm just gonna throw this out there, but being a person who played (And plays) city trial a lot, this looks a lot different from city trial.

smashball5 · Jun 3, 2013

Pikmon2 said:
I'm just gonna throw this out there, but being a person who played (And plays) city trial a lot, this looks a lot different from city trial.

Yeah, it's my first time to make a map, but I thought i did a pretty good job of making it look like City Trial. Well, thanks for the feedback

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