City Trial...Again

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Input file:
Code:
MapName: CityTrail
Author: smashball5
BuildTime: 60
GameTime: 600
WorldTime: 6000
SpawnProtectTime: 0
WorldWeather: 0
Team0:
  SpawnType: 0
  SpawnLocation:
    ==: Vector
    x: -697
    y: 67
    z: -2470
  ChooseKit: false
  OneKitPerRound: false
  KitResetTime: 1
  BoxChance: 0
Team1:
  SpawnType: 0
  SpawnLocation:
    ==: Vector
    x: -697
    y: 67
    z: -2470
  ChooseKit: false
Centre:
  ==: Vector
  x: -695
  y: 93
  z: -2486
WorldSize: 96
SkyLimit: 200
ResetInventory: true
CanUseLocate: true
SurvivorRestrictedPlaceAll: true
SurvivorRestrictedBreakAll: true
HunterRestrictedPlaceAll: true
HunterRestrictedBreakAll: true
MysteryBoxChance: 0
SurvivorRestrictedBreak:
SurvivorRestrictedPlace:
SurvivorRestrictedBreakEx:
HunterRestrictedPlace:
HunterRestrictedBreak:
Kit:
  HunterFree:
    Scavenger:
    - WOOD_SWORD
  Juggernaut:
    Titan:
    - DIAMOND_HELMET
    - DIAMOND_CHESTPLATE
    - DIAMOND_LEGGINGS
    - DIAMOND_BOOTS
    - DIAMOND_SWORD
    - BOW
    - GRILLED_PORK|16
    - WOOL|64
    - POTION.8258|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.8257|1
    - ARROW|64
  HunterLeader:
    Brown_Kirby:
    - IRON_SWORD
    - BOW
    - ARROW|16
    - IRON_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
  HunterStart:
    Red_Kirby:
    - WOOD_SWORD
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - RED_ROSE+Red dye!:Use it to make you red, Kirby!
    Blue_Kirby:
    - BOW.ARROW_DAMAGE:1
    - ARROW|64
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - LAPIS_BLOCK+Blue dye!:Use it to make you blue, Kirby!
    Yellow_Kirby:
    - MONSTER_EGG.54|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.51|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.52|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.66|1
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - YELLOW_FLOWER+Yellow dye!:Use it to make you yellow, Kirby!
  SurvivorStart:
    Red_Kirby:
    - WOOD_SWORD
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - RED_ROSE+Red dye!:Use it to make you red, Kirby!
    - BREAD|5
    Blue_Kirby:
    - BOW.ARROW_DAMAGE:1
    - ARROW|64
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LAPIS_BLOCK+Blue dye!:Use it to make you blue, Kirby!
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - BREAD|5
    Green_Kirby:
    - POTION.16396|3
    - POTION.16389|3
    - POTION.8258|1
    - POTION.16388|1
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - CACTUS+Green dye!:Use it to make you green, Kirby!
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - WOOD_AXE
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - BREAD|5
    - BONE+White dye!:Use this with the green dye to make yourself lime green, Kirby!
    Pink_Kirby:
    - STONE_SWORD
    - BREAD|5
infected_alien8, i was wondering exactly how much of my original map do you have that can still be used for the new one? I know you have the input file, but do you have the kits? And speaking of input file, i have made the size of the map the whole plot with the center being -695, 93, -2486. I would still like for this map to be called City Trial. I am still the only one that worked on this map. You called it too open last time, so i made various things to make it less open. I had made actual rides (but you cant actually ride them), the little boxes that you get the power-ups out of in the real game, I have also made random events happen like in the game. There are meteors on the ground and in the sky, there is the mystery bird Dyna Blade, (which i dont think i did a very good job on), and the pillar that appears. There are a couple new chests added. I have also made the rail system around the city like in the real game. My plan is to have the players get on the rails and sort of like fight each other on there if they want to. However it is not practical and i dont expect many to do this. Also, I hope that the transitions between the different places look fixed. im not much of a good builder so i dont really know if they are good. I will get jub to make another schematic of the map. here are the screenshots that i took.
http://imgur.com/Vkunuvz,96yFQud,M9...vD5gE,F49GZNr,PQt1jqK,quBkoqt,RKRRR4d,X4DAd3j
Along with the other ones from the last entry (which are in there too), that pretty much covers most of my map.
I am also looking for jubjubers to make my schematic, because he made the first one, and i dont want duplicate City Trial schematics
EDIT: I also left out a couple of screenshots. These are the screenshots that transition between the places. There is also a picture of the whole map overlook with the new stuff, so in the first upload disregard that map overlook.
http://imgur.com/Vkunuvz,96yFQud,M9...vD5gE,F49GZNr,PQt1jqK,quBkoqt,RKRRR4d,X4DAd3j
 

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smashball5 You have been told before to use the format. Your lucky this submission doesn't get auto declined sense you should know better. Please use the correct format.
Name of map:
Author:

Size:
Map boundary:
Kits:
Random or choose kits?:
Screenshots:
Notes:
Download Link:
Input File:
 

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Im sorry for what i have done. I didnt realize it was wrong. I was just asking infected alien about what he has from the last map entry. I will do it in correct format now, and i am sorry again. I hate making people mad at me. sorry.

Name of Map: City Trial
Author: smashball5
Size: the whole plot (192x192)
Map Boundary: x boundaries -600, -791
y boundaries -2582, -2391
Kits: I dont know if infected alien has the kits still, that was why i asked him in the above post.
Random or Choose Kits: Random
Screenshots: http://imgur.com/Vkunuvz,96yFQud,M9...vD5gE,F49GZNr,PQt1jqK,quBkoqt,RKRRR4d,X4DAd3j

http://imgur.com/15YJQuI,JA7RqBP,xgyHLcH (i realized i copied and pasted the same url as the first on the first post. Just entirely disregart the first post.)
Notes: i dont know exactly what infected alien has from the last submission and what he doesnt have. I will try to find jubjubers and make a new schematic because i dont want 2 City Trials out.
Download Link: I forgot exactly what i did for this, but i think it was the warp names. Like last time, i had 2 schematics, one made by me (the warp name is smashball5) and one made by Salient Gorilla (CityTrial).
Input File: I know that infected alien still has that. Thanks infected

Once again jammy, awfully sorry for making you mad. i hope these frowny faces can express how sad and sorry i am.
:(:(:(:(:(. Hope i did it all right. Im still sort of new to this.

Input file:
Code:
MapName: CityTrail
Author: smashball5
BuildTime: 60
GameTime: 600
WorldTime: 6000
SpawnProtectTime: 0
WorldWeather: 0
Team0:
  SpawnType: 0
  SpawnLocation:
    ==: Vector
    x: -697
    y: 67
    z: -2470
  ChooseKit: false
  OneKitPerRound: false
  KitResetTime: 1
  BoxChance: 0
Team1:
  SpawnType: 0
  SpawnLocation:
    ==: Vector
    x: -697
    y: 67
    z: -2470
  ChooseKit: false
Centre:
  ==: Vector
  x: -695
  y: 93
  z: -2486
WorldSize: 96
SkyLimit: 200
ResetInventory: true
CanUseLocate: true
SurvivorRestrictedPlaceAll: true
SurvivorRestrictedBreakAll: true
HunterRestrictedPlaceAll: true
HunterRestrictedBreakAll: true
MysteryBoxChance: 0
SurvivorRestrictedBreak:
SurvivorRestrictedPlace:
SurvivorRestrictedBreakEx:
HunterRestrictedPlace:
HunterRestrictedBreak:
Kit:
  HunterFree:
    Scavenger:
    - WOOD_SWORD
  Juggernaut:
    Titan:
    - DIAMOND_HELMET
    - DIAMOND_CHESTPLATE
    - DIAMOND_LEGGINGS
    - DIAMOND_BOOTS
    - DIAMOND_SWORD
    - BOW
    - GRILLED_PORK|16
    - WOOL|64
    - POTION.8258|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.8257|1
    - ARROW|64
  HunterLeader:
    Brown_Kirby:
    - IRON_SWORD
    - BOW
    - ARROW|16
    - IRON_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
  HunterStart:
    Red_Kirby:
    - WOOD_SWORD
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - RED_ROSE+Red dye!:Use it to make you red, Kirby!
    Blue_Kirby:
    - BOW.ARROW_DAMAGE:1
    - ARROW|64
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - LAPIS_BLOCK+Blue dye!:Use it to make you blue, Kirby!
    Yellow_Kirby:
    - MONSTER_EGG.54|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.51|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.52|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.66|1
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - YELLOW_FLOWER+Yellow dye!:Use it to make you yellow, Kirby!
  SurvivorStart:
    Red_Kirby:
    - WOOD_SWORD
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - RED_ROSE+Red dye!:Use it to make you red, Kirby!
    - BREAD|5
    Blue_Kirby:
    - BOW.ARROW_DAMAGE:1
    - ARROW|64
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LAPIS_BLOCK+Blue dye!:Use it to make you blue, Kirby!
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - BREAD|5
    Green_Kirby:
    - POTION.16396|3
    - POTION.16389|3
    - POTION.8258|1
    - POTION.16388|1
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - CACTUS+Green dye!:Use it to make you green, Kirby!
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - WOOD_AXE
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - BREAD|5
    - BONE+White dye!:Use this with the green dye to make yourself lime green, Kirby!
    Pink_Kirby:
    - STONE_SWORD
    - BREAD|5
 

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Okay, first off thanks for trying again!
This is what I have of your input file:
Code:
MapName: CityTrail
Author: smashball5
BuildTime: 60
GameTime: 600
WorldTime: 6000
SpawnProtectTime: 0
WorldWeather: 0
Team0:
  SpawnType: 0
  SpawnLocation:
    ==: Vector
    x: -697
    y: 67
    z: -2470
  ChooseKit: false
  OneKitPerRound: false
  KitResetTime: 1
  BoxChance: 0
Team1:
  SpawnType: 0
  SpawnLocation:
    ==: Vector
    x: -697
    y: 67
    z: -2470
  ChooseKit: false
Centre:
  ==: Vector
  x: -695
  y: 93
  z: -2486
WorldSize: 96
SkyLimit: 200
ResetInventory: true
CanUseLocate: true
SurvivorRestrictedPlaceAll: true
SurvivorRestrictedBreakAll: true
HunterRestrictedPlaceAll: true
HunterRestrictedBreakAll: true
MysteryBoxChance: 0
SurvivorRestrictedBreak:
SurvivorRestrictedPlace:
SurvivorRestrictedBreakEx:
HunterRestrictedPlace:
HunterRestrictedBreak:
Kit:
  HunterFree:
    Scavenger:
    - WOOD_SWORD
  Juggernaut:
    Titan:
    - DIAMOND_HELMET
    - DIAMOND_CHESTPLATE
    - DIAMOND_LEGGINGS
    - DIAMOND_BOOTS
    - DIAMOND_SWORD
    - BOW
    - GRILLED_PORK|16
    - WOOL|64
    - POTION.8258|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.5|1
    - POTION.8257|1
    - ARROW|64
  HunterLeader:
    Brown_Kirby:
    - IRON_SWORD
    - BOW
    - ARROW|16
    - IRON_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
  HunterStart:
    Red_Kirby:
    - WOOD_SWORD
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - RED_ROSE+Red dye!:Use it to make you red, Kirby!
    Blue_Kirby:
    - BOW.ARROW_DAMAGE:1
    - ARROW|64
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - LAPIS_BLOCK+Blue dye!:Use it to make you blue, Kirby!
    Yellow_Kirby:
    - MONSTER_EGG.54|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.51|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.52|3
    - MONSTER_EGG.66|1
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - YELLOW_FLOWER+Yellow dye!:Use it to make you yellow, Kirby!
  SurvivorStart:
    Red_Kirby:
    - WOOD_SWORD
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - RED_ROSE+Red dye!:Use it to make you red, Kirby!
    - BREAD|5
    Blue_Kirby:
    - BOW.ARROW_DAMAGE:1
    - ARROW|64
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - LAPIS_BLOCK+Blue dye!:Use it to make you blue, Kirby!
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - BREAD|5
    Green_Kirby:
    - POTION.16396|3
    - POTION.16389|3
    - POTION.8258|1
    - POTION.16388|1
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - CACTUS+Green dye!:Use it to make you green, Kirby!
    - LEATHER_CHESTPLATE
    - WOOD_AXE
    - CHAIN_BOOTS
    - BREAD|5
    - BONE+White dye!:Use this with the green dye to make yourself lime green, Kirby!
    Pink_Kirby:
    - STONE_SWORD
    - BREAD|5
I have sorted out the new center ;)
As for the map itself, it does look like a lot of fun; very colorful and creative! It's still quite wide open but I think it will work for this map. However, even though you have edited/added some more structures, for me the building still isn't top notch, sorry. Maybe ask an advanced builder to help? :) But it's a -1 from me right now. Thanks for trying, and please do remember to use the format!
 

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I think it looks a bit to much like a classic map still, and very odd differences from the original. Better then the last version though. I'd say remove a lot of the wool, and maybe bird guy (Can't remember his name >.<)
 

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I think it looks a bit to much like a classic map still, and very odd differences from the original. Better then the last version though. I'd say remove a lot of the wool, and maybe bird guy (Can't remember his name >.<)
But the bird guy is what i used to take up space. I know its not very good, though.

Thanks for having all that stuff from the input file still. i will improve. Can i improve during this submission, or does it have to be a week after its declined? I will take your advice and get an Adv. Builder to look at it and give me ideas. Thanks for all the help.
 

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I think it looks a bit to much like a classic map still, and very odd differences from the original. Better then the last version though. I'd say remove a lot of the wool, and maybe bird guy (Can't remember his name >.<)
But the bird guy is what i used to take up space. I know its not very good, though.

Thanks for having all that stuff from the input file still. i will improve. Can i improve during this submission, or does it have to be a week after its declined? I will take your advice and get an Adv. Builder to look at it and give me ideas. Thanks for all the help.
Feel free to improve it now and update the thread :)
 

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Im sorry to say, but i cant be on for a while. :( I just recently had some summer camps to do so that was why i couldnt do it earlier. But now, I am having a vacation with my family for about a week and cant be on any time soon. i am sorry for making you wait. Well, i guess ill see you about a week from now then, bye.
 

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Apologies for the inexcusably long time it has taken for me to respond to this. I am a huge fan of how much variation there is in the map, however the detail is somewhat lacking, unfortunately.

Declined for now, sorry!
 
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