Here are some tips you can use to improve the video:
Change the music, the static thing was really killin my vibe and I don't want to see the whole video cause of it, but I still watched it.
Put more pictures, at some point we were on the same picture for like 30 seconds straight and it was getting boring ._.
Make the beginning credits shorter or just put them in the end. When I watch a video I want to see the video to see if it's good, if I like it I will go see the creator in the ending credits.
Hope I helped :D