My First Map! Under The Dome [ABANDONED]

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Ok So I Made A Map Based On The Popular Tv Show ''Under The Dome''. I Think Its Pretty Cool
And I Hope You Do Too! Just Saying You Don't Have To Accept It It Was Just A Little Project I Did So Yeah. ~West:D
Name Of Map: Under The Dome.
Author: 22wester
Size: 86x86
Map Boundary: X:-3069.42915 Z:-453.33843
Kits: Survivors: Nurse: wood_sword milk red_rose leather_boots leather_chestplate Guardian: stone_sword chainmall_chestplate chainmall_boots bow 12 arrow Hunters: Enforcer: stone_sword
bow 32 arrow iron_chestplate iron_leggings Salvage: wood_sword iron_chestplate gold_helmet
Random Or Choose Kits? Random.
Screenshots:
And If That Does Not Work Do /warp UnderTheDome
Description: So I've Been Watching The Show Under The Dome For A Bit Now And I Was Looking For Ideas For A Map. At First I Thought To Do An Underwater Map But It Was Really Hard To Get The Water In. Then One Night After Watching Under The Dome Thought Of It! A Map Based On Under The Dome! Then The Next Day I Started Construction. The Map Took About Two Days In Total.
Download Link: My MediaFire Account Is Not Working. The Warp Is /warp UnderTheDome
If It Is A TOTAL Nessesity I Will Get Someone With Experience To Help Me.
Input File: Heard That U Only Have To Do This If Your Map Is Accepted. So Yeah.

Final Note: Please Leave Feedback Good Or Bad I Just Want Some Feedback! Tell Me If Im Doing Anything Wrong! Im Am Totally Open To Edit Requests And Am Making My Own Edits As Well.
~West:D
 

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It Looks Pretty Good, Good Job. But Why Are You Capitalising Your Words Like This? I Can't Read Them Very Well.
And also, format is favourable by staffies. I hate to be the etiquette Nazi, but they'll tell you anyway.
:3
Name of map:
Author:
Size:
Map boundary:
Kits:
Random or choose kits?:
Notes:
Download Link:
Input File:
 

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I can't see the input file? The map looks fun, but I think it's too small? Like is there a way you could make it bigger? But looks like fun to play, lets hope op's like it too :)
 

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It Looks Pretty Good, Good Job. But Why Are You Capitalising Your Words Like This? I Can't Read Them Very Well.
I can't see the input file? The map looks fun, but I think it's too small? Like is there a way you could make it bigger? But looks like fun to play, lets hope op's like it too :)​
Thanks as I said I will be making requested edits but that perticulur edit will be hard.. /hsphere is a risky command.

I can't see the input file? The map looks fun, but I think it's too small? Like is there a way you could make it bigger? But looks like fun to play, lets hope op's like it too :)​
And if the map gets accepted I will get the input file.
 
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I can't see the input file? The map looks fun, but I think it's too small? Like is there a way you could make it bigger? But looks like fun to play, lets hope op's like it too :)
And if the map gets accepted I will get the input file.

I think you are supposed to have it already? I don't know, ops know better :D
 

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Cole please refrain from triple posting and triple quoting and use the edit button provided, thanks.

As for the map, if you are still making edits to it I am assuming it isn't finished?
Sorry that was an accident, but it is finished but I am editing some mistakes I forgot along with the other suggested edits.
 

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Okay, thanks for submitting a map!
However, for me this map is too small and basic; it looks very rushed. I think you should make the buildings look a bit more impressive, and make the whole map bigger and more exciting on the whole :) Add more terrain, more places to go ;)
Also, it would be great if you could have an input file ready please. :)
Sorry, but it's a -1 from me.
 

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Okay, thanks for submitting a map!
However, for me this map is too small and basic; it looks very rushed. I think you should make the buildings look a bit more impressive, and make the whole map bigger and more exciting on the whole :) Add more terrain, more places to go ;)
Also, it would be great if you could have an input file ready please. :)
Sorry, but it's a -1 from me.
Ok Ill Redo It And Make A Whole New POST
 

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Okay, thanks for submitting a map!
However, for me this map is too small and basic; it looks very rushed. I think you should make the buildings look a bit more impressive, and make the whole map bigger and more exciting on the whole :) Add more terrain, more places to go ;)
Also, it would be great if you could have an input file ready please. :)
Sorry, but it's a -1 from me.
Ok Ill Redo It And Make A Whole New POST
Are you sure? The other staff members still have their votes to cast :) But if so, I will decline this for now then.