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So, after I saw Ealev's thread, I noticed you guys like poetry.
So, hi. Post here and stuffs.

I tried poetry just, and... Yeah, I suck at it.
Her blood, slowly dripping,
dripping down her unfortunate canvas.
Flesh, roughly stripping,
stripping of her pain.

Her stomach, rapidly starving,
starving for a better body.
System, painfully living,
living for those around her.

Her mouth, slowly drowning,
drowning in floods of caffeine.
Addiction, gradually winning,
winning the battle.

Her past, hurtfully regretting,
regretting all the pain she caused.
Happiness, unfortunately cutting,
cutting down into pieces.

Her eyes, hatefully seeing,
seeing herself in the mirror.
Her hatred, sadly being,
being in every crevice of her existence.

Her anxiety, terribly controlling,
controlling her life.
Sanity, daily crawling,
crawling further away from her.

Until one day, she finally cracks,
cracks and swallows;
swallows the final pill.

And just like that, the pain was finally over.

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Heres some poetry, god , I suck. this is from the dark days (6th grade)

I've been encroached
By a never ending darkness my whole life.
I've been wandering around in this dark void, scared, confused, and alone, looking for a way out. I've been torn into a million microscopic pieces by lies and images that never recede
but now i found you - a small glimmer of hope in this dark, dark world. I wont ever lose sight of you.
 
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They call me sokka
That is, of the water tribe
I am not an oaf

You think you're so smart
With your fancy little words
This is not so hard

I calls it easy
Like i paddle my canoe
Ill paddle yours too

Squish squash, sling that slang
Im always right back at ya
Like my, boomerang

Thats right im sokka
Its pronounced with an okka
Young ladies, i rocked ya

(counts on fingers, 1....2..3...4...5......6.....)
Oops.
Jolteon42 i couldnt skip on such an opportunity.
 
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You're beautiful
I love you
You make life wonderful
I hope you love me too

Please don't be mad
I know your sad,
I know it's bad...
Talk to me
Come on, aren't we
A couple?

FOR MA GIRLFRIEND
 
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So I wrote a Redwall poem a while back, just gonna copy paste because if I read it now I'd probably cringe and not post, but here: (ALSO KEEP IN MIND, NO IDEA WHAT MAKES A POEM, IF THIS IS JUST WORDS THEN, WHOOPSIE)
A wise hare once told,​
​
Of a land bewoe’d.​
With a breath and a shudder,​
She painted a picture of the lands to the north.​
She told me of the deep frost,​
the icy glaciers,​
the enveloping darkness as night falls over.​
But worst of all,​
She described to me,​
The tyrannical Foxwolf, hunting with his horde.​
Breaking familes, scarring lives,​
Ruining souls, reaping a toll.​
He never stopped and continued to plunder,​
But didn’t bargain the fact that he’d be defeated,​
By the warrior spirit, that lives in some creatures.​
 
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In the cold of night, she slept

Wrapped in her own shadow

Shivering every once in awhile

Waiting for the next nightmare

But then she saw a light

Forming in the distance,

It was the sun,

And she feared no more.
 
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Mate,
It's bloody freezing,
Bro,
I think I'm wheezing.

Lad,
I need a chippy,
Pal,
Cuz it's cold and shitty.

Dude,
It's pissing it down,
Aye son,
This weather don't half make me frown.

Come on England, get it together,
I'm sick and tired of this summertime weather.
 
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One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
 
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Re-Disclaimer: Don't know the definition of poetry and especially with this one having no rhymes, it might just be words on a page, but oh well - right? ^_^
I call this Blocktopia because my time here, other than TS and the forums is at an end and my generation is kinda dead:
Broken warrior standing midst the fallen kingdom
Walking pathways shrouded in fog.
Cracked cobblestones of no guidance.
Where does he wander? To where does he call home?
Homeland torn asunder, no place to turn.
The broken warrior sets off again.
 
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I'm a llama he's a llama she's a llama too.
Here's a llama there's a llama the llamas came for you.

iiDeathCookies said:
So, after I saw Ealev's thread, I noticed you guys like poetry.
So, hi. Post here and stuffs.

I tried poetry just, and... Yeah, I suck at it.
Her blood, slowly dripping,
dripping down her unfortunate canvas.
Flesh, roughly stripping,
stripping of her pain.

Her stomach, rapidly starving,
starving for a better body.
System, painfully living,
living for those around her.

Her mouth, slowly drowning,
drowning in floods of caffeine.
Addiction, gradually winning,
winning the battle.

Her past, hurtfully regretting,
regretting all the pain she caused.
Happiness, unfortunately cutting,
cutting down into pieces.

Her eyes, hatefully seeing,
seeing herself in the mirror.
Her hatred, sadly being,
being in every crevice of her existence.

Her anxiety, terribly controlling,
controlling her life.
Sanity, daily crawling,
crawling further away from her.

Until one day, she finally cracks,
cracks and swallows;
swallows the final pill.

And just like that, the pain was finally over.

Feel free to post, under these conditions;
  • You're welcome to constructive criticism
  • You're open to all sorts of criticism!
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Thats actually really beautiful, I'm glad you posted that.
You worded it so wonderfully.
 
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DarkHender said:
Hell mine was about Llamas! I want llamas in real life!
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Okay, I agree with you on that one xD
I want me a llama c:

EDIT: So I was asked to write more. Did this just;
Slowly, her eyes flooded, her fears rose.
She slid the blade across her hips.
As her self-esteem slows,
A fake smile covers her lips.
 
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